Monday, January 28, 2013

Review: Thought Forms by Jeffrey Thomas


            Ray, a man who is living in the house of his brutally murdered parents, is being menaced by mysterious figures.    His cousin Paul is working nights at a plastics factory that becomes a fight for survival, as a monster stalks him and a group of workers.  These two storylines alternate between chapters and build to a violent and deadly climax for the both of them. 

The Good:
·        The Atmosphere- Thomas keeps the mood claustrophobic and filled with menace.  It is unspoken but there is a darkness creeping out of every place the characters are not currently experiencing; behind every unopened door evil and violence awaits.
·        Slow Burn- The book takes its time getting where it has too, which complements the atmosphere of menace.
The Bad:
·        Typesetting- Some problems with page layout that moves sentences around to accommodate the page.  Not major but breaks up the flow of paragraphs. 
·        Slow Burn- A lot of what happens is the characters ruminations and inner monolog.  There is little action to be had until the last hundred pages and even then only in the last fifty do things really take off and the blood starts to be spilled.
·        Characters- The two main characters fall somewhat flat.  Both stories are lacking dialog, while in line with the main theme (No Spoilers), makes the protagonists feel underdeveloped and conceived in a vacuum.      
The Verdict:
·        Who should buy this: Fans of Thomas work will want to add this to their collection.  Anyone who enjoys a slow story that is more focused on the inner lives of its characters.
·        Who should let this sit on the shelf: Those who like action and quick story progression and fans of epic large-scale stories and larger than life protagonists.
·        My Opinion: Thomas’s work is an acquired taste and this book is at the far end of that spectrum.  Start elsewhere, the short story collection Punktown is a first stop, and then move into this book.  Most will find this book slow moving and hard to get invested in. 

Total Score: 2 out of Five Shoggoths 

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